The Great Do-Over

I’ve spent this summer working on draft two of my novel, which, I’ll be honest, I was completely dreading. After all, who likes rewrites?

I knew it had a few problems, mainly plot-related. I tried everything possible during the first draft to outline the plot the way the experts tell you – I used note cards, I tried to write the whole thing out in a Word document, I read book after book about writing blockbuster novels and mastering the three-act story structure. And you know what?

I still have to rewrite it.

You always have to rewrite it, to some degree.

Now that I’m back in the thick of it I’m discovering places where the story works, but I can go deeper with the actual prose. And I’m finding it enjoyable, this layering of the story. It’s what I imagine plastering a room must feel like – adding to the base in nice, thin layers so you have an even coat, a perfect mix of imagery, characterization and story. I know the characters so much more intimately now – they took me in directions during the first draft that I never expected, and they continue to refine their own stories as I revise.

Every now and then I’ll admit to a small freak-out when I realize I’m on page 250 of a 500-page Word document, but I’ve set a deadline for myself (October 10) and I’ll make it through. I suspect the revisions on the back half won’t be as intense as the front, but you never know.

And when I’m done, of course, it’s probably on to round three.

Book Twelve: Saint Maybe

Book 12 was really supposed to be Vanity Fair, but I stopped reading partway through to dive into Anne Tyler’s Saint Maybe, which I picked up at the Calgary Reads book sale last week. I often have more than one book on the go at the same time. I like to mix it up a little, especially when I’m reading classics.

I had only read one of Tyler’s novels before – Ladder of Years, which I picked up whenever it was a nearly-new novel. I couldn’t get into it for some reason, and after that tended to avoid her books. Which is why I was so surprised when a friend in my critique group said my writing reminded me of Tyler’s. After reading Saint Maybe I consider that a massive compliment. She is, as one reviewer put it, “drawn to small-scale domestic dramas.” This can be taken as either praise or criticism of her work, I suppose, but there’s something about her writing – the plain-spoken rhythm of it, the well-drawn characters – that transforms the everyday into something much more significant. I realize some people want big adventure and splashy escapism when they open a novel. I do, too, sometimes. But I’m often struck by how well some writers can tell stories rooted in the everyday. Anne Tyler is one of those writers.

The novel begins when Danny Bedloe brings his wife-to-be home to meet his family. He introduces her as “the woman who changed his life,” but Lucy quickly comes to change all their lives, especially that of Danny’s younger brother, Ian. Through a series of twists and tragedies Ian becomes the guardian of his nieces and nephew, the older two of whom were Lucy’s from a mysterious, previous  marriage. The story focuses on Ian’s quest for forgiveness, which leads him to drop out of college and attend The Church of the Second Chance, whose followers dedicate their lives to absolving their sins in practical, meaningful ways (like raising their brother’s three children, for example).

There is a scene later in the book where Ian visits the reverend of the church, and he brings along onion dip and potato chips. The reverend has always wanted to know how to make onion dip but has never learned, and so Ian teaches him (yes, soup plus sour cream) and they eat the potato chips and talk about the future of the church. I found this scene fascinating – Tyler weaves together the mundane and the significant so deftly the scene is wonderfully revealing. What does not knowing how to make his mother’s onion dip, which is really just onion soup mix and sour cream, say about a person? His relationship with his mother? His relationship with the person who shows him the recipe?

I read so often about how to craft scenes that do more than one thing, and it’s brilliant to see it laid out on a page. It has given me something to aspire to, that’s for certain.

Writing about Writing

I’ve always resisted the idea of making this a blog about writing, though in a sense it has never been anything but a blog about writing. Or not writing, it seems. But lately, writing about writing seems to make more and more sense. While I write for a living, the writing I do off the clock – fiction, natch – has, until the last year or so, been withering away in a dark back room somewhere, shoved aside in favour of more practical pursuits. I long felt that the world had enough writing blogs, and it didn’t need one more. Apparently I’m over that. Now I think ‘why not combine the two things that are inspiring me most right now, and share it with other people?’

Also, if I devote this blog to my 100 Novels experiment alone, you can expect roughly two posts a year.

I’m currently enjoying Book Twelve (which is really probably more like Book Thirty, still pathetic) but it’s a biggie. I could probably read four books in the time it’s taking me to read this one, especially since I dropped a glass of red wine on it the other night and stuck the last 150 pages together. So until I’m finished I’d like to share something else I stumbled on this morning: The Guardian’s Rules of Writing series.

Some of today’s most successful and inventive fiction writers share their rules for writing. They’re both funny and profound, and the list includes some of my personal favourites – Elmore Leonard, Roddy Doyle, and Margaret Atwood. Check it out, and tell me what you think.

‘Tis the Season

I figured I’d blow the dust off this thing and take a moment to show everyone a little something that’s been going on in the Home Office. I regularly work with Damashek Consulting, a boutique agency based in New York, and this year the team has put together a special holiday site.

I think it’s our best yet. Take a look! Maybe you’ll find the abominable snowman, or figure out what to do with the tiniest doll in the matryoshka

DC Holiday E-mail 2008

The Post with the Finish Line

There is something about finishing a project that’s always a little bit bittersweet.

Well, okay, not always. Sometimes I can’t wait to be done. Today was one of those times. I’ve been slaving away on this stuff for nearly three months, and the closer I got to the end, the longer it took me to finish every page, every label, every block of copy. It’s as if someone came up behind me in a marathon and tied my shoelaces together.

But I finsihed, on time. Now all that’s left are niggly little revisions and updates, I hope. A little back-and-forth, and then I’m off for two weeks. When I get back, I’m sure panic will set in, the way panic always does, and I’ll be convinced that my last job was really my LAST JOB, and that I’ll have to go work at Tim Hortons just to pay the mortgage.

Looking back on the last few months, a couple of things are pretty clear to me. I need lots of variety, which means I need projects that aren’t super-gigantic. And I need some fun to break up the monotony. So perhaps when I get back, my first goal should be to find fun assignments and minimize the dry ones.

Yeah. I know what you’re thinking. As if.